Double Page Spread

Audience Feedback: "I would cut the picture out and make the background colour of the left hand page EXACTLY the same as that of the right - it's things like this that make it obvious that the magazines are not professional. The first letter of the article could be even bigger. You could add a photo credit, underneath the subheading of the article."

Contents Page Draft 1

 Audience feedback

I like the red targets on the contents page.

Using the letter P for “page” doesn’t look professional.

Layout appears simple.

Draft 6

Audience Feedback - "On your cover, you need to do some more work on the layout of your main cover line - it's not very eye-catching in the current layout. It would also make sense for it to be in the same font and colour as the masthead - as this would make it clear that that's the most important story in the magazine AND that it relates to the main image." 

I decided to further redraft in order to make my magazine look more professional. 

Draft 5

• I have decided to continue to redraft my front cover as I think it appears too busy and I believe it would attract the audience more if the artist was looking towards the camera.