Draft 4

• Audience Feedback
• Your barcode needs to be in the bottom right hand corner, and it needs to contain more than just numbers - maybe even consider adding the issue number, price and date / web address to it. Look at one on a real magazine and then emulate . . .
• Your thumbnail images look pretty good but I'm not sure they're in the right place on the page.
• Add more words to your teasing contents and make it a bit smaller / not as deep / thick - EASTLIFE POSTER may not be enough info?
• You need your coverlines to allign to / move them slightly to the left rather than them being centralised . . .
• Change the size of the font for the subheading of your main coverline.
• Your masthead could be bigger - it should occupy around 1/5 of the page.
• Put something more interesting in your spalsh.

Draft 3

I felt that this front cover was too plain as it didn't contain enough information to attract the audience which is why I decided to continue drafting.

Draft 2

I think the colour scheme of this draft makes it appear to be a pop magazine therefore I will continue to redraft to ensure the audience can determine the genre.

Draft 1

Because this is my first draft I believe I can expand it to make it better so I will continue to complete more drafts.